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Dying Stars
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Flipping,
Falling,
You tear through the sky.
Twirling,
Trailing,
They all ask you why.
Dancing,
Diving,
Down from so high.
Swiftly,
Silently
A spark in their eyes.
Dragging,
Dropping,
Your dreams now are nigh.
Toppling,
Twisting,
Your allies speed by.
Falt'ring,
Flound'ring,
Your strength is now dry.
Softly,
Slowly,
Your remnants will fly.
Falling,
You tear through the sky.
Twirling,
Trailing,
They all ask you why.
Dancing,
Diving,
Down from so high.
Swiftly,
Silently
A spark in their eyes.
Dragging,
Dropping,
Your dreams now are nigh.
Toppling,
Twisting,
Your allies speed by.
Falt'ring,
Flound'ring,
Your strength is now dry.
Softly,
Slowly,
Your remnants will fly.
This is a poem that I wrote while at work... and personally, I'm not a HUGE fan of it, but I don't think it's bad. Please tell me what you think.
© 2012 - 2024 Ita-MI
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Very nice, madam. I'm inclined to concur with Mirlo on this one, I like it the best out of what you have posted. I'm a sucker for alliteration, and I love the concept.